That was so amazing...very nice job

please keep writing and I will keep reading 5/5

Really ahmazing i love it 5/5

Im feeling this poem..

So sadd...♥

Great!!

:] 5/5

This poem, wow , its speechless, it feels like lyrics to a rock song, and thats cool.....

Wow. I like it. Very emotional... dark :) Kudos! 5/5 :)

I really like the layout and how you set up the words. it adds so much to an already amazing poem. i think the repetition that "buying happiness by the bottle" commented on was what made it so special. great job :)

Good poem, it turned out pretty well
only line id look back at was

Blood drips from my:
Wrists again. I'll make sure to end this time.
Blood drips from my:
Neck. A real nasty kind

bit of a tough rhyme, if you could make the last line a little bit longer and a better word to rhyme with time, this would be perfect

Really powerful poem, made me think. hold on, it's gonna be worth it.