Comments : We, the outsiders, do not understand

  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Wow. i love this. i could not find the format, but the emotion was something i could relate to. this was simply amazing. the wording was beautifuly tradgic. this was a wonderful poem.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 16 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I love this poem off!!! at first i was sceptical and from the first couple of lines i thought it was going to be i want to die and i am full of pain kind of thing, a bit rubbish like my first work. but when i read
    strength exits through my frail pores
    i have failed myself and all others
    i am a disgrace to society

    i realised this poem has a deep methodical rhythm to it and is amazing. i loved it and btw i am a buddhist, pm me anything u want to no
    xx