So this poem was decent. i would prolly give it a 4/5 mainly because i wasnt really able to comprehend some of the poem. but it was still well thought out. i got the basic meaning of the poem. lol. but maybe you should proofread your poems once more( if you already do) before you post them because i found some grammatical errors... i am terrible with those myself. i never proofread and find out that i spell a word all weird. haha.. but still it was a good poem.