Nice

The shortness didn't change a thing 50 more stanzas couldn't make it better! 4 reel never a better job!

Gr8 poem very deep....i like the words you use!!!

Ohh this is great! so i give 5/5 actually it was not long enough but evey word are so deep and real. i enjoyed this one love it!

I love this poem just might be my fave =)

Noelle