I'll go to the bathroom.
sit at the mirror look at my face.
watch the tears roll down over and over again.
pick up the green razor.
ill think about it once again and again.
before I think of doing something stupid.

This is (to me) most emotional stanza. I really enjoyed reading your excellent work. You deserve 5/5!!! Keep up the good work...

Fridus

Beautiful poem.
i know exactly what this is like.
the emotions were portrayed very well.
this poem was deep and well written.
i like it. 5/5.

Just wanted to say wow i mean wow oh and to say hi :)

"You've moved on with your life.
I'm still sitting here in the cold."

I know this feeling all too well. You expressed a lot of passion in it though. 5/5

Good work 5/5

Woooow.
what a strong message.
and so very, very true.
i absolutely adore your writing style.
it's beautiful and brilliant.

the last stanza was my favorite. it really spoke to me. keep up the good work! i look forward to more!

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Wow, I'm sure alot of people could relate to this poem. There was so much emotion there and my heart went out to you! I hope this wasn't true, but if it was, I hope you've moved on or found someone new. Beautiful read.

Aww... This is sad. :\ I bet so many people could relate to this poem in their own way. These feelings that you portrayed in this poem were amazing and totally from inside YOU. Great work. 5/5.

This was a really sad piece, showing a lot of emotion. But like the other poems I've read, the stanzas didn't match all much. I loved it though because I have felt like this before, so I know how u feel. Nice job.

.:CiNdY:.