My love my shining star

by alimay   Nov 4, 2007


You are the one,
the one for me,
the one that will always be with me.

your the one that makes me smile,
the one that makes me happy.

even though we have our ups and downs,
our good and bad days,
we make it work all the way.

i love you,
and you love me,
and thats the way it should be.

i love you more and more,
every minute,
and every day that passes by i learn something new,
and i love more,
you are my love,
my shining star!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    You used the word 'love' in here way too many times for it to not get overboard repetitive.

    It was a little cliche, since love poems are often a very popular kind of poetry. You should try to stay away from saying things like "I love you so much" in poetry and add your own personal twist. Something that says that it's *you* who loves this other person. Something to make it unique, something about your relationship that is different form others.

    Cute write. Hope to see more in the future ;)