Love this poem, love the expressions

Very good feeling in this poem... lot of emotion showen

5/5

Danielle
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Thx for reading n commenting

I liked the story behind it. Good emotion too.

Ohh very sad but u had expressed well all the hardly feels inside.. nice

Wow, very deep

"Love is not about happiness
It's sharing pain and miseries"

you are the first 'GUY' who has similar thoughts as i have

"So if you still can't understand
Sorry, I can't lend you my hand
Cause it's all about give and take
Not just laughing, that's a fake"
liked this part most

good job

Wow really sad and amazing
I loved the flow in it
keep it up :)
5/5

I love this, it has a great message too. At first I was going to suggest that you might think about rhyming a word with "love" in the very last line, but then I realized that using "have" sort of marks that it's the end of the poem because you've broken your rhyme scheme. If that makes any sense =] Again, it's great 5/5