I disagree with what you think our generation is all about. However I do think that this poem is structured well, and very interesting to read, regardless of my opinion on the topic i think you did a great job writing this poem.

So true, so deep.

A very opinionative peice.
I think many will agree and disagree with what your wrote.
It's interesting to read, and gives a clear message of your veiws.

A. improvement in you work rado..
Well done
Keep it up,
--Elaine.