No it doesn't stink i can totally relate and that's why i can relate. I love this part:
Love me and stay with me
Or hate me and leave me
Make up your mind
^its just what i would love to tell him.. Good job! Keep it up
5/5
p.s. thanks for the comment :)

Take care

Hahaha lol sorry I mean i can totally realte and that's why i love it xDDDDD
anyways I really enjoyed reading it

I love it ur a good poet