Comments : I'm No Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by unknown

    Very nice poem,, Great rythme, and nice flow...
    You give a perfect picture about what that angel do.. It made me remember about this world, which full of this kind of creature.. So nice outside, very dark inside.. ^^
    Love this poem..
    keep up the good work,,
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    Wow.. good emotion, plus love how u displayed it!!
    totally understand
    plus love wm!! lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Spirit

    What i liked:
    i like the over all story very chic
    i like the colorful rhyming

    what i didn't like:
    i didn't like how some of your larder words confused me and made me mess up your flow.

    Complenments:
    Love the title
    the lenght is just right

    Improvements:
    Put some commas when listing in the first verse

    otherwise great job lovely read
    :~)Sam Mayo

    Ps this shall be in my favorites because i believe that this poe applies to all people

  • 12 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    A dark evil poem, i liked it
    Angel on the outside, but evil within..

    Incredibley evil though.. perhaps to evil...

    Really well worded, It has a nice flow.

    Keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Omg wow
    this poem is amazing. i especially love the ending "No one ever guesses, I'm the one who caused it all". so cleaver and perfectly written. i loved it. the flow is impecable and i love the theme.

    great work i'll keep reading.
    5/5 much love .xx

  • Wow, this poem totally took my breath away. I like the way you made the poem rhyme and it is very well written.

    "Intricately spun lies, spinning rapidly out of control
    Such a long time ago, that darkness took my soul
    Enjoying all of the drama, and many tears that fall
    No one ever guesses, I'm the one who caused it all"
    ^^This was my favorite stanza because to me it was what topped the rest of the poem. Excellent poem. 10/5<---if this was possible, but for now a 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 12 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    This poem is well written. Although you have a few spelling/grammer errors. I loved this poem mainly becuase I can relate to it in many ways and then again I can't. I love your style of writing and the tone of this poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Herald

    Wow....i hate it...when..people do this...to...add..to...comments...like, they'll do what im doing right now...anyway, dont count this...

    just this stuff =)

    anyway, omg, that poem gave me goosebumps...i can totaly get into your mindset, how u play games with people and sit back to enjoy the show..sounds like a good idea. but yeah, most of the poems i read that are "for contsests" are crappy, this one, pretty good, some of the rythm seems a bit forced, but the rhymes tie all of it together. i loved the ending,
    "im the one who caused it all"
    that was like, awesome!

    ps: ur poem defintely made my top

    10/10

  • 12 years ago

    by xXx Expecting xXx

    That is some deep crap but i knnow exactly wat thats like.....i am totally like that with certain people.....

  • 12 years ago

    by damont

    I can relate to this. im surprised you haven't broken down yet. you make it seems like your living a complete lie. well its a wonderful poem. worth the score givin.

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Wow...this sounds like a couple of women I know....I think the term is passive aggressive....and you have captured it perfectly!

    Your rhyming is perfect...flow flawless....I can actually picture the little witch smiling!

    "Thinking I'm so sweet, when all I do is play mind games
    Taking pleasure in shame, purposely causing pain
    A flawless exterior, hides all the evil that I hold inside
    Relishing in the fact, that so many people have cried"

    ^my favorite of the verses.....hard to believe there really people like this....nicely written....very sad but true! Take care, Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by Mollie

    I love it.... kind of sets a person smack dab in the middle of a high school girl drama... and what you think all the "mean girls" are thinking... i like how you portrayed the story gives nice detail of everything. Excelent. keep it up
    mollie

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    WOW! That was powerful! Your emotion was so strong, and the words flowed flawlessly together. Great topic choice, you were able to write such a great poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Very very very good.

  • 11 years ago

    by Whitney

    You are a great writer with an amazing gift to show so much emotion in every piece that you do. You couldnt have chose any better words than what you did with this one. Along with the others another fantastic piece. Great Job hope to read more. :)
    ~*Whit*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    I love this poem, ALOT.

    ur freakin amazing. my friend told me i was her gardian angel so i wrote a few poems about her, please comment on one of mine. (these black wings is an angel one) ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    I love this poem, ALOT.

    ur freakin amazing. my friend told me i was her gardian angel so i wrote a few poems about her, please comment on one of mine. (these black wings is an angel one) ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    This poem reminds me of my ex-girlfriend.A painted face with decaying skin.You write very well.5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Such an evil person you have portrayed here...I hope this is not you!
    The poem has a good flow and choice of words to it.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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