Comments : Lies

  • 16 years ago

    by Dayna Henson

    This reminds me someone i knew and it bring back memories. Its a wonderful poem...
    Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Wonderful poem, reminds me of one or two people, keep up the great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This poem has alot of emotion however the flow was off.

  • I loved this poem. Except, the flow was a bit off and there were grammar errors. I loved the ending line though. 4/5 for now.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A touching poem. Although this person hurt you, you still are willing to give him another chance. I liked the structure and rhyming, keep it up 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Chris

    A good poem that people can relate too because almost everyone knows a person like this. I know a couple. Some I still wanted to be their friend and others I didn't. 4/5