Comments : Inspiring

  • 16 years ago

    by abcede

    Hey love the personification of all the ideas!

    keep it up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Very strong lines in so little words, keep up the good work =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Goldgal

    This has so much mean and it is definitely inspiring to say the very least. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I liked this stanza the most :)
    "Inspiration flows as air.
    We are inspiring,
    for inspiration
    holds us hard."

    5/5 from me :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    A truly inspiring piece....
    and a lovely thoughts of words
    sounds very dedicated to anyone!

    hmm love the style and the rhyme! keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Its seems to me you are talking about us, poets! Am I right???
    Beautiful poem, much is said with so few work.
    It deserves a 5/5!

    Take care,
    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Wow, i loved this.

    This poem... is so inspiring...

    Your stanza's where.. all very beautiful
    And incredible poem...
    Its.. so deep.. and true

    i love it.

    i'm also adding it to my favorite poems..
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Keath

    Very nice one! I like the flow, the end and also the other stanza's.

    Merits
    mark your victory.
    So true but I still love the line. Nicely written.

  • 15 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    That is absoultely breath taking.
    I love it.

    Winks
    rise with wonder.

    Feelings
    flow through guidance.

    Blood
    pours pure passion
    ^^^
    I love these three stanza's
    they just are like the final puzzels pieces to the puzzel

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This was pretty well done but I felt it was mediocre compared to your last piece. It seemed to short and to simple, it was still written well and had the flow but it was just missing the knockout punch. I gave this a 4/5 good job