Amazing!

This was dark, haunting, and an enjoyable read. I loved the language you used, it created flawless imagery. Each word held power and meaning and the poem overall was a joy to read.

Well done *5/5*

It's got good flow, and you stay on the theme the whole time. way to not drift off of the subject. As far as word usage, I think it could use a little more work, it's kinda monotonous. And after reading it I feel empty, drained, that's not particularly the kind of poem i enjoy to read but nevertheless it's alright. i rate it 4/5

Hmm ur bored but u seem done a great job! actually i was enjoyed there are only few words that i can hardly understand because of the deep words hehe well inspite of that still have a nice flow 5/5

This is really great one. The emotion flowed very well. I can feel it. I've done with this one, please return the favor, pick the title you love the most. Thx b4!!!

I didn't really understood what you tried to describe in this poem, so I'll relate to the structure. Overall there weren't any rhymes, the flow went on good and the stanzas are aligned nicely. 4/5

Hey dear I love this poem and it depicts sheer feelings and its very well written. I will put this one in the contest nominations for sure and Im giving my weekly vote for this one. So 10/10

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What I like most about this is that there's nothing predictable about it. There's no rhyme, no blatantly obvious structure, no mindless vocabulary...
Brilliant~
Your choice of words is exquisite, and I love how short yet precise your poem is. 5/5, keep up the great work!!

I definately think we all get this way at times, that feeling of being trapped and alone. Even when we're around people it doesn't seem like any of it is real. Excellent thoughts on this piece 5/5 GG23