Ok dear here is my suggestions:)

Lets go out dancing in the rain...
Lets wash away all our troubles
And be free from our pain.

Rain doesnt judge like people do,
It doesn't care whether you've troubles
And its all very very true

It falls for all with nature's call
Not only for the rich and nor for the poor
But its for all and its for sure

Hope you like my suggestion :)

Love to help

Tc
Fsams

Hey i have a suggestion wat about

Lets go out dancing in the rain
Lets wash away all our troubles
and pour out the pain

let me know wat u think thanks

I think you should say "Let's go dance in the rain" but decide yourself...
The meaning is nice and it's a little sad. Let's dance in the rain because it's the only thing that can cure our pain...5/5

I love it how it is, its very beautiful. It expresses how nature doesn't care what you've done or what you're going to do, it will always forgive you and give you a new chance. Keep up the good work. ^_^ *5/5*

Haven't we danced in the rain together before????LOL Good work...just add a little more um...rain...LOL

Good work so far. Keep it up.