Simple, short, sweet. i like it. good job

Wow thats great short but good

OMG! this is so good. especially for u being so young. good work. :)

Nice, u will beomce a brilliant poet as time progess's this one needs a 5/5

Very nice poem. It's very well written. Good job Lily. 5/5

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