Comments : Complete my Soul

  • 16 years ago

    by Iola

    Is this woman worth your love?
    Your touch, your beautiful soul
    If her heart is incomplete
    Can she make your heart whole?

    What if her sun is shining in your eyes?
    And blinding you from her imperfection?
    Rocking, rolling and a thousand lies
    Cannot break this perfect connection...

    She is blessed, she surely is
    Can she heal your bleeding scars?
    Will she run or will she please?
    You’re the sky, she’s a thousand stars

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was amazing. so beautiful. i loved every word. it was a lovely poem. a great flow, and a heartfelt piece of work. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.