Hmm this is GREAT! but u know what, this is more EXCELLENT if u put in ( L0VE category). but, though still u impress the readers coz it seems u had done a great imagery. even the structure was nice. so i give it 5/5 keep it up!

This is a very good representation of your true feelings. It strikes home with me personally, as this is pretty much EXACTLY what happened in my relationship. I think it is very good. Kepp up the good work. 5/5

Perfect poem with the perfect lexis used, rhymes and the flow is also awesome. This is one of your best poems I should say :) Love it all the way. So romantic and filled with love :) 5/5

tc
Fsams