I love Japanese forms and the Tanka is one of my favorites, you did an excellent job with the poem.

This was done very beautifully. 5/5

Short, sweet and very romantic....nicely done

Ahhh,, I love the warm fuzzy feeling I got from reading this. Lol.
Beautiful write. 5/5

I adore these styles of poetry. You have put so much emotion and feeling into sure little words. A fantastic job, well done Hun :)

I love that you wrote a different kind of poem. its nice to see something different every now and then. Nice poem. good subject. nicely penned 5/5

This is stunning, really beautiful...

keep up the great poems Ingrid

take care
XXX

This was just beautiful. The loving words you wrote with were warm and appealing. Wonderfully done. *5/5*

Such a stunningly beautiful poem. Utterly charming and moving at the same time.

I have read this before, i remember, it was great then and it still is :)

5/5 David

Very short and pretty!! I love the way you connect the gentleness of love to a soft breeze. ^^

Brilliant poem. Words profound and yet filled with romance. I love reading tanka's, which yours was the best. Well-penned 5/5.

Take care,

Sarah A.

Nicely Done, Very Well Penned, Bravo!!!

Very good job!

This is such a deep write. Your poems are so full of love its as if the reader gets a warm sensation of it all their own. I like how you kept your flow and the stanzas were steady. Wonderful.
<3Raych