Really vivid imagery bring this poem to life, You have a way of making the mundane seem vivd.
Really nice flow to it right from the start, keeps the readers attention nicely.

Good to see other people noticing the beauty that is all around us every day.

~Pete.

This was such a descriptive poem! I loved it! 5/5

I loved the imagery you portrayed in this piece, so beautifully done and creating such vivid pictures for the reader.

I thought the flow was good for the most part, just in a couple places it was shaky, and I noticed that there were quite a few fillers (I, anf, the etc) which I think is what disrupted it.

Try eliminating some of those and you'll find the flow goes so much smoother.

Apart from that though, I thought this was very pretty and elegantly written.

Your words truly painted a flawless piece of imagery. Each line flowed perfectly and the rhyme scheme was effective. Well done *5/5*

The last two lines werent perfect, and that kind of drawed my attention to how brilliant the first stanza was. Amazingly written, with such awesome beauty. i love nature and i loved how you captured the beauty of it so well.
love always, Tara-Kay
x

One word: inspirational. Great job. 5/5

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Very very inspiring.
great job, so amazingly written
draws you in and makes you picture
wow. just wow.
keep it up :)