Oh holy crap...the emotion and depth in this piece is amazing. you managed to put so much in despite it being a relatively short piece and that isn't always easy to do. i loved the ending..I found it to be beautifully intense and very powerful, while the whole piece was written with so much beauty and grace.

Lost / Unrequited love is hardest thing to deal with but one of the easiest things to write about. It always scratches at you just below the surface always a tiny bit away from your reach.

Although this type of poem has quite litterally been done to death, you make this one very bearable. It's a very emotional piece and packs a lot of punch to it.

Nice job.

~Pete.

This was such an emotional poem, I loved how deep you wrote this it was truely amazing and took my breathe away. A short poem which still held such an impact within it. I can't express how much I enjoyed this. It was definitly so amazing and so sad. Elegant. Well done. ~Mel