This is really good... Theres so much feeling in it. Every body has to feel this way some time in their life.

Keep writing
this is a GREAT first poem!

Thanks guys this is only my first poem i have another one called How much i could love you check it out and tell me what you think

That was beautiful, just adored it. 5/5

V_V makes me remmber...

All to true my love, stick with it, good write, xp

A very true and pure write. it shows good emotions, and the wording was great. a simply lovely write. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.