Comments : Tragic Teenage Heartbreak

  • 16 years ago

    by lostsoul13

    I luv this poem. u definitely got your point across. well, anyways, great poem!!!

    lostsoul13

  • 16 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    OMG. I was like "if this is a depressing poem, I'm logging off." the button was right there but I didn't cuz it was so good! made me cry though :P mascara sting and thank god for the note at the end, I was like omg kayla... lol but anyways... kudos hun. brilliant. ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I liked it very descriptive and its been awhile nice poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I could really relate to a lot of this. Well not right now, but not too long ago I could. It really touched me. You did a great job writing this. I look forward to reading more of your poems. :]

    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Brilliant. Purely brilliant.
    5/5