I like this I agree

AWW! *hugs tight* Cheer up! The sun will shine on you one day (trust me)
I reallylike the poem, its sad but cute

This one showed the true pain inside of you.
well written....... :)
please return the favor

I liked the repitition.

nice work

I can feel the sad tone in this poem. It is very good.

O my gosh
i love this poem
ur a very good writer
keep writing
5/5