Wow, this is a very beautiful poem. You expressed the feeling really well and it is well written. Great job. 5/5

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Awhh, i loved this hunny. It was so sadd though. I loved the extended metaphor in this, comparing it to different seasons really was effective. the flow was good and the emotion was strong. nice job love. 5/5

Oh wow! The opening stanza is really powerful! It really grabs the readers attention... The flow was flawless! Keep up the amazing work! you're really talented! never stop writing. I hope to read more from you.

Beautiful. The emotions you described here, of getting your heart stolen, were wonderfully said and easy for me to relate with. I loved how the poem flowed effortlessly and the story you told was refreshing. I do think the first sentence was amazing because it truly captured my attention. The last stanza, was a perfect way to end the poem.

"I wanna stay this way forever, I wanna lie in the grass forever."

^I do think the repittion of the word "forever" here throws off the flow.

"Before that, it seems my hearts been too much aching."

^ this sentence did not flow for me.

Overall the poem was a wonderful joy to read and a beatiful story was told. Well done *5/5*

I love the opening, the style, the flow, the rhyme and most of all the poem. Flawless, 5/5. Em