Comments : Broken Vows

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a very sad poem and indeed time does not heal everything 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Hi viola
    It's been a while since I last heard from you :)
    I absolutely love this poem, but mostly the ending. It really touched me. But I'm wondering: where did you get the inspiration to write about something like this? Cause writing about divorce, marriage is something you can't relate to, what so ever. You never experienced those emotions ; So I think it's a real challenge to write about something like that, and I admire you for taking this attempt. And it really worked out well for you. I love this :)
    Keep it up!
    Sarah
    x x