I liked this one not everyone will understand it but i did and that makes it great.

Ilike how it sounds ^^

SHort, sweet and to the point 5/5

Wow. This was perfect.
Your I's need capitalized.
But, other than that I'm afraid you've done quite a wonderful job.

Amazing,actually.
The flow is perfect. Actually, flawless.
As is the word choice and emotion.
Wonderful, Joshua.