A beautiful poem with a very strong message, I like those kind of poems.
His grandfather always told him,
Life was like a jigsaw game.
"You have to put the pieces together
And for no one shall you change."
was my favorite stanza...
I just think you need to fix this line:
A admirable land with beautiful flowers,
to: An admirable land with beautiful flowers,
Amazing work, 5/5
Hmmm wonderful work! i enjoyed how u portrait the story of this poet it has a dept meaning and it was very appreciated, i love the title seems like a very fantastic stories of someone ...very impressive work of urs... just keep on writing and keep it up! 5/5
Awww very heart warming!!! i loved it! great work.. you are an amazing poet, and let anyone tell you any different! this poem had great imagry, flow, word choice.. and well it was amazing! lol.. * i wanna house of chocolate! lol* great meaning as well! i love it! i had me smiling! keep it up! :D