Hah i love this poem.. it's really great. It's alot diffrent then the rest of your work which shows your diversity. I love all the rhymes.

Lol I like the dedication at the end quite interesting. I think alot of people go through that with there boyfriends mother. I'm lucky I havn't... Hopefully I don't jinx myself. I enjoyed this poem it had a sarcasm effect within it too. I found your flow to be gorgeous and I think this was my favorite of yours I have read today. A great poem definitly worth the read. Well done keep up the good work. Loved it. 5/5 ~Mel

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Hahaha...dont many of us feel that way...Dont worry, she'll get over it when your married and have 2 kids jeje j/k! Great poem loved it 5/5