Wow i like this poem, really stirring, lol,
great job
keep it up
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Nice peom

I really liked your poem, def something a lot of people can relate to. Good Work! :)

I liked this alot Tammie:D Wonderful!

This was another power piece by you, Tammie. The metaphoric choice of words here were perfect. I liked your choice of them, strong deep and held a punch. The meaning behind this just wow. It had me captured. A beautifully penned poem which was emotionally touching. Hit the heart deeply. Well done keep writing so I can keep reading. ~mel