When and Will

by Jiyaa   Nov 13, 2007


When I cry in your arms
Will you caress me honey
When I touch & kiss your palms
Will you feel loved or funny

When I say I love you
Will you respond to me
When I close my eyes
Will you feel so free

When I come so close
Will you bloom like a rose?
When I touch your cheek
Will you lol and freak?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hello...
    I liked your poem. It's short and very rhythmic. Also it holds a meaning to me. But only thing I dislike in this poem is the last line. I don't think that 'Lol' stuff is poetic at all. You should change that with proper word. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That was beuitiful and very sweet! i loved it