If time flew like a dove.

by nufia   Nov 13, 2007


If forgetting you is as easy as erasing pencil marks,
I'd take all the rubber to erase everything back to start anew.
If loving someone won't cause so much pain,
I wouldn't have suffered from a broken heart now.
If time flew like a dove,
I'd make it fly faster than I'm falling in love.
So this is what you call love.
That causes so much pain.
If love don't cause much pain,
I wouldn't have regretted falling in love with you.
So why should we.
Waste our life.
With this.
If I knew this is going to happen,
I wouldn't even waste a blink on you.
And if moving on is as easy,
I wouldn't have spent my nights crying.

So tell me,
What should I do when everything just don't seem right.
Waking up each day with shattered yet high hopes,
That never fail to greet me every morning.
Do you even know,
How these things are killing me so slowly?
Oh wait, you just don't give a damn.
Do you know how much it hurts,
To flip your photographs everyday & hoping that someday dreams will come true.
Oh wait, you don't even know me.

But I'll wait for everyone to walk off,
To tell you how much you mean to me.
It's crazy how you don't know me and vice versa.
And yet my feelings grow.

And now I don't even know how to say this,
But I love you.

[ I'd really appreciate it if you could give me comments , and tell me how i can improve on it and all . ]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I just loved this. The painful love you described is something I am sure many can relate with. The first stanza was very strong and truly lured me in.

    "Waking up each day with shattered yet high hopes,"
    ^beautiful line!

    well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by nufia

    Thanks (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Oracle

    It's great how you created this. wonderful poem with the tones being just right.also, i love how you compared the emotion to those things in the beginning. dangerously close to cliche, but it worked out well in your poem. awesome job!
    :-)

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