Wow, this is so powerful! Mind- blowing piece, with the deepest tones and dimensions of darkness. You wrote this poem greatly, created haunting and unique atmosphere. Effective poem, from the beginning to the end.
I like your choice of words a lot, and your rhymes are original and excellent.
Amazingly done!

This is awesome

No words; One of your best poems.

This is awesome..three dimensional poem..with so much sentimentality...thumbs up.