Now I know why you asked me about time.

You know, I wasn't going to end up commenting your poems..
Because for one, I had forgotten this poems name..
and two.. I didn't know if you want me to.
But, there is always that 'complain' button, so.
I figure "Why not!?"
& also, I found another one written by you.

After reading this for a second time,
I'm thinking many different things.
I suppose you were right,
People think they know what the poem means..
but it probably isn't even close to the real depth.
Well, we both know I have no clue the what the real meaning is.
BUT. I thought I would drop by and tell you..
That your poetry is read more than once.
That stalkerish feeling you probably just got,
Was NOT intended at all. So my apologies.

Overall Rating: Undecided. (:

I really, really like this.
It's very well written and creates such great imagery.

This piece is more of prose, but it is one that I enjoyed reading. Though this sounds more like thoughts, and fragments of memories, at least it does to me.

I guess I would need more reads to gather what this piece is about... And to link the title with the ending...
so I might stop by and give it another read.

Nonetheless, very good.