Very creative piece of writing. There's a punch in this poem. Flow is fantastic and lines are amazing. Worth reading!

Really really good poem!! 5/5

WOW, this was absolutely amazing!!
Your poems always keep me
so intrigued
and eager to read on.
This really had me thinking
and put so many various thoughts into my mind.
An excellent job!!
Keep it up!

Very unique way of writting
(but that i'm not the first to say ^^)
needed a second reading to understand it all, and a bit of thinking. had to get into the poem, and words, to get the message hiding within.
but after , really makes you ponder.
the flow is just breathtaking. using ponctuation to guide the reader.
The images are so intense. Many senses are used in this poem, which makes it so expressive.

really hope i get the time to read your other poems.
^^

Wow.....an amazing piece of poem.
u really do make the reader imagine.

(Twirl the flower to feel the thorn-)
i like this line.......
i try to imagine the twirling of the flower & feel the thorn....

great poem.....
i'll read more of ur poem soon......
im nt thinking twice to give u 5/5 for this poem...

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!