Great poem love the reptition of deep deep dreamless sleep. Has a nice ring to it.
Anyways its an interesting poem about sleep and yet it interwinds life as well.....

Nadia

5/5

Wow, it's a great poem and so deep that i can feel the emotion...5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

Well it was a good poem. but I think it would be better if you used punctuation in this poem. :)

This is good... i like it