Beautiful, but short. Maybe you should write it in spanish first then in english. This way, it may confuse those that don't speak spanish. Yo te entiendo girl. Hiciste bien. 5/5

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I loved the spanish in this poem. I speak decent spanish, so I understood it without the translation, but, it was beautiful. It created a beautiful flow in the poem, and gave it some flare. I really enjoyed that approach. Nice work.