I can see that you've improved once again :) The flow was smooth, good job. It's really good that you've dedicated this for someone. (I think I know who he is :P)

Well anyway, keep up the good work.

Oee.. I like this one..
A very good poem, probbly for a good guy ;)
Anyway, like the rhyme and wordchoice.. there was a nice flow..
Vey well written
Take care

Birgit,
Very nice...heartfelt emotions and great flow.
I loved reading this poem!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Me likes.. ;) especially the future thingy with the I Do..
(marrying? :P )
hahah well it looks like you're in love so... g'd luck and god speed ;) :)

This is such a beautiful and sweet poem. i loved the part about the I do's. it is such a wonderful thing to be in love. the rhym and flow was perfectly done. an amazingly wonderful poem. it deserves more then a 5, thats for sure. 5/5

Kalee

A sweet poem, full of puppy-love emotions. I liked it so much. It flows and touches the feelings filling them with hope and joy.

good luck

Her Guardian

How endearing! I can't help but feel warm and fuzzy inside after reading this. Hehe. I'm for real, though.

Cute stuff. ;)