Comments : Eclipse

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I liked this poem alot. the words and flow was amazing. my fav lines were

    I walk this hell and find my end
    I walk alone, without a friend

    i can relly relate to thi. very good poem. loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Marci

    Amazing, and thats just about all I can really say about it. Its so full of emotion, though I'm sure all your poems are. Its great, well written..and just pulled me into it! 5/5!