Wow.. this poem is really touching! Each and every stanza had such a powerful meaning. I don't understand why more people haven't read it and commented it. It is a great poem and the ending is amazing! Excellent job! Keep it up =)

Um.. I like the concept, but you need to work on your rhyming, and your rhythm. Some parts are brilliant, but then there's a little quirk in there that just throws the reader off. Keep working at it, because you obviously have something to offer the world. =]

Loved the message u sent in this. really touching. 5/5 loved it