Comments : Blinded By Light

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is very afectionate. i liked it alot. but the one stanza kinda confused me. i think u missed spelled something or mis worded it..

    When you walk in through the door
    My feelings start to race
    I just feeling like jumping one you
    And kiss you until we get tired

    thats the stanza that i think needs fixing. overall though very great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Yet another cute one! ^-^ Keep up the good work! Can't say much about this one other than awww! lol <3

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    LOVE POEMS! hehe i liked it alot! im not a real luvyduvy person but this was definatly a really cute poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    AWW BABY, I LOVE THIS!

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    I really like this the first few lines had me, so nice to read about too..you write so nice too keep up the good work sweetie..5/5