You had a great vocabulary and the poem still sounded great keep it up!!!

I liked it...
I think that here and there
there were some flow issues
but that's easily fixed
I loved the message
4.5/5

I really liked this poem, mainly because i can completely relate to it. there were numerous lines that stood out to me, that i thought were wonderful lines that connected into the poem. great job, i loved it.
5*5
Kimberly

This poem i can say that im that girl cause i have so much things that i have been through but i hide behind being funny i guess i try to find some good
in it....but i guess its easier to cover your problems than face them...great poem!!

Another one of your great poems. Out of the whole poem, my favorite stanza was the first one since it says about the girl hiding her real feelings. You did a great job. 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

This was very sad to read.But the title juat brings it out..Emo smiles is very original.

She hides behind her emo smiles
And covers her tears with a deceitful mask
She hides her sorrow through her laughter
Awaiting the day, she will finally crash

I related to this verse so much.Because constantly i feel like dying and when i read this i knew it would be good.Just as your others...
~Jo Anna EL