I loved the shakespear feeling you portrayed with your word choice throughout this poem. It was really great and flowing. This poem had alot of emotion hidden within each line which you expressed nicely to create something capturing. Overall this piece was a great read which I did enjoy. Well done. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

The rhyme scheme is questionable. I dont quite understand why this particular style was chosen, as it kinda takes from the seriousness. However the words and vocabulary, the detail. These overcome it. Its amazing.
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