Comments : Take It All Away

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was a beautiful read. i enjoyed it very much.
    my fav lines

    You make my problems go away
    With just those simple words you say
    You know exactly what to say
    To take it all away

    i can relate to this very much. i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Awww!! It was very cute! I especially loved the last stanza and adding "without you nothing else matters" helps to make the poem complete. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Hehe u luv writing cute poems huh...? cuz this was CUTE!

  • 16 years ago

    by Red CSIII

    It's perfect ^_^ It feels like dialogue, but that's its magic,

    It feels so passionate, yet youthful;
    so i guess that cute is the word to use here ^_^ thank you for sharing this with us
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikki

    I really liked this one=)))

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I don't know who you wrote that poem for but whoever you did write it for should be very happy because that is a beautiful and cute poem...I love It=)

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    THAT'S EXACTLY WAT I'LL DO.

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    THIS POEM IS SO SWEET AWW EX SPECIALLY THE LAST STANZA AND DID YOU WIN THE CONTEST?!!!..=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    I absolutely love this..and can definatly relate to it.

    +5