Wow! this poem is very dramatic. it kept my intrest through the whole thing., i dont think i seen anything wrong with it. i jus loved it..

nice to know u have a friend to talk to.. love the poem.

This is really great, even though it's very long, I don't get bored. It flowed very well and makes me amazed with your work. Brilliant writer. That's what I can say about you. It's 5/5 without a doubt!!!

Wow It you must have spent a lot of time on this poem but it was worth it! Excellent job!
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I really enjoyed reading it, Your a brilliant writter!

This is beautifal. I love it:) Keep writing and I will keep reading:) x