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I really loved this piece alot. Vampires are really interesting me at the moment as you proberly noticed from my poem. This was dark and intense holding terror within each line. Loved the iamgery you portrayed I thought it was really vivid. A great poem. well done ~Mel

Hmm.. you describe the character perfectly terrifying, i would like to ask are there any deeper meaning behind the poem? or you simply would like to describe a fearsome myth?.. anyway, it's nice.