Wow. Love it. Defintely write more, it was great!
Keep up the good work.

Wow, this was amazing. I really loved the imagery and analogy you've expressed in this.

In the first stanza, did you mean "petals" instead of "peddles"?

This was really beautiful.

Wow, Karl. I havn't read any of you poetry in such a long time and to come back and read this just stunned me. I absolutely loved this. The beauty and emotion was deep and powerful the love created over the atmosphere was elegant and pure. Such a gorgeous write. You should be proud. Well done. ~Mel

Whoa....That was AWESOME!!! I loved it. Havent read a poem this good in a while. Great Job. 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Okay first off ... beautiful title!

This was an incredible love poem that just filled me with glee! The emotions and images described in each line were so powerfull and flawless. I loved the comparisons you made throughout, they were quite effective. Again, this has to be on of the best love poems I have read in a while. Well done *5/5*

Ohhhhh... I love it!
Magical piece, one of the best love poems I've read in a while. Your descriptions are amazing, absolutely breathtaking, and the emotions are expressed perfectly in the whole poem.
My favorite stanza is:

-The depth of our love like an ocean will never be known,
I'll always savor the strawberry flavor of your immaculate kiss,
Soaked with your love to the bone, hearts etched in stone,
Never a moment I'll miss, most search a lifetime for love like this. -

Simply beautiful!
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Wow, I love the imagery of warm chocolate and rose petals...and strawberry kisses, yum yum. I hunger. Okay, let's do a little poem breakdown:

Incapable to think about anything but your smile,
^ I think this is somewhat awkward.

The first three lines of the last stanza are incredible, especially the third line. Phenomenal imagery, and I'm not just saying that.

The last line of the poem is confusing because of this: "most." The poem flowed so well, but then "most." I had to stop for a half-second to think, "most what?" Then realize you were talking about most people. So that disrupted the flow, just slightly. That, or I'm semi-retarded ;)

Definitely a 5/5. Nice writing!

Awww...this is sooo sweet... u seem really nice...i especially like the part: On the balcony of eternity, the most perfect view,
We stand together, glancing on the peak of forever. ur nice ;)

Awww...this is sooo sweet... u seem really nice...i especially like the part: On the balcony of eternity, the most perfect view,
We stand together, glancing on the peak of forever. ur nice ;)

Wow. beautiful. <3. :]]

Great poem truley beautiful keep it up xxx

This so fantastic, really, I liked how u wrote it, ^^ so sweet

Sweet and romantic with beautiful flow and imagery! Great job penning this one!

Wow... this pome was A-MAZING... the poem flow great and it was powerful.... i love the comparsion throughout the poem.... it was nicely written.... i adore this poem keep up the good work 5/5

xoxoxox
Jess

This is really good. Its a bit heavy to the eye and tongue but its still awesome!

I love this poem it has so much emotions 2 it. it reminds me of when i first meet my boyfriend. its romantic but very sexy. keep up the good work

I reall like that poem its gives an image of what youn wnat the reader to "see" with nyour words. 5/5 p.s. would u mind looking at sum of my poems also I kinda have a hard time finding friends here so I have to start somewhere! ^_^

WOW.. pretty heartfelt.. i like your style alot it makes your poems enjoyable... and one can rly c that u r in love

How romantic!!! This is really sweet... I enjoyed reading it. Good job!!!
God bless you always!!!

-Pink Butterfly-