Comments : That Little Thing

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    A very cute love poem.
    There always is that little something.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    Haha.. great write, and your profile made me smile! You seem like an awesome person and I can totally relate to this poem, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by HeckY

    It's a very cool poem, i liked 2much

  • 16 years ago

    by rylie

    Thanks. i love it. oh and i am half way through yours. you'll have it by thursday.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost in Life

    Speechlessly beautifull
    some parts could have flowed better
    example:That little thing that leaves me speechless...I don't know what to say.

    could be bettter like this:
    That little thing that leaves me speechless when I don't know what to say

    *better than periods*
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Ahh I just loved the ending here. Everything you described I agreeed with 100%. The emotions were beautiful and the explaination of how youre falling was flawless. Wonderfully done. *5/5*