This was a good poem. I love the message behind it and the content is good. I think some lines could have been a bit shorter but the emotion is excellent.
Good job =)
3/5.

This poem seemd a bit forced. the flow didnt go over all that well. but the words in this was amazing. i enjoyed readin this very much. keep up the good work

Lol thx

A good attempt however this poem didn’t flow very well, this may have been caused by the continues repetition of I also when you do use I it needs to be in capitals.

This is sad. :[
nice piece, but sad.
i been through this. a number of times, actually.
and i know the feeling suckz. "/

but great write. 5/5.