I can really imagine this poem in my mind. i love the imagry (sp) i hope you can get out of this confused spot of your life.

I do not think it is confusing at all. As a matter of fact, I think it is beautiful. The way that your confusion and pain is expressed in these few lines is amazing. The emotion was deep && your flow was flawless. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

I really enjoyed this piece of art, The story behind it was portrayed nicely, really deep and capturing. The emotion was effective and I like how this was a poem but yet sort of a prose/story at the same time. You really put alot into this and it was easy to follow. Really a nicely written poem. I enjoyed it and give you a 5/5~Mel

Okay first off, I think you are truly talented when it comes to picking a title for you poems. They truly wow me.

The poem itself was another wonderful write by you. The emotions were real and raw; your vocabulary was perfect. I loved how you starte your poem, it had me hooked.

You should never be sorry for what you are feeling or for what you write. And never let anyone put you down for your work because you are truly talented.

Well done *5/5*

Your style is one that is all your own! i find that awsome! you can really tell your words are just that... your words! u really have a tallent for painting pistures

Wow, wow, wow!
I'm amazed with this piece and honestly impressed! Whole poem is excellently written and it has great choice of words and flawless descriptions. It is not confusing to me, I can relate to it in so many ways.
The imagery in this piece is so vivid and unique and emotions are expressed amazingly!
I like everything about this piece, and I think that you should be really proud on yourself for writing this.
My favorite lies are;

-I'm a piece on a chess board with limited moves that I can make,
And every time I acknowledge your presence, the more you seem to take.-
^^
So deep, fantastic

The title is also brilliant.
Keep writing, you have a great talent!

Wow...super good...sorta confusing...but its ahmazing..so yeah..5/5!<3

~heather lynn-so wear me like a locket around your throat ill weigh you down and watch you choke~