Great poem... The concept had me captured from the first stanza... It was very well written we great word usage. And the ending was the best. The final stanza was a great clincher for the poem. 5/5

Really nice, love this part in particular " you said it was over for good, and would never get back together, while just the other day you said you would love her forever " not only does it rhyme well but its well thought and nicely placed, keep up